fox
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Post by fox on Jul 25, 2008 20:00:49 GMT -5
Character Name: Lee Tang Age:21 Gender: Male
Description:Lee has a red eye and long brown hair and is kind of muscular. He has tan-white skin, a red shirt, and black pants. He wears an eye patch over his missing right eye and has a long scar on his chin that goes through his lips to his right check. He also wears a black bandanna with a skull on it on his head.
Personality: He is nice to everyone but when he is in a fight he is fierce. His hot-headedness, however, can put him in danger. Lee tries to act like he is mean and strong toward strangers, but when he is by himself he stops acting and is a very calm person.
History: When he was a kid he was always being picked on for being a wimp. Because of this he started exercising and learned earth bending to gain respect. When he was a teenager he learned how to sword fight, but he lost an eye when he tripped on his sword . The accident cut out his eye. His family was a good family. His dad trained him how to bend and his mom showed him how to cook. When he turned 18 he joined the army. (I hope that is good guys)
Fighting Style: Earth Bender
Equipment/Tools/Pets: A claymore
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Post by Pikachu on Jul 25, 2008 20:09:57 GMT -5
*sighs*. I'll fix the grammar and spelling mistakes, but please try to be more careful.
Next, could you please expand on the history a bit. You could probably add some more to it. Look at some of the other character's histories to get an idea of what we're looking for (or at least me).
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Post by fox on Jul 25, 2008 20:15:10 GMT -5
sorry I will try harder next time.
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Post by Digital ♥ on Jul 25, 2008 20:17:23 GMT -5
For those who live under a rock (like me) dont know what a claymore is. Could you possible provide a link, or describe what it is?
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Post by Pikachu on Jul 25, 2008 20:27:26 GMT -5
I don't think she actually needs to. You can look that up yourself, and all a Claymore basically is is a two handed sword.
Edit: And fox, I made the corrections in grammar and spelling. However, I still would like you to expand on the history. Especially with the eye thing since something like that would have a big impact on someone. Try thinking how living with one eye has effected his relation with his family, friends, etc.
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